Rhizome Post #1 | Dana Bell

I loved Teresa Poast's Fairy Tale poem about Hansel and Gretel. It is just about kids who got into trouble with an older lady because going to near to her house. I like how she had the line "You kids are dead," this just lead back to the original fairy tale.

When I read the post I just could see clear images in my head. I could see the baseball game, the kids, the window breaking, and even the old lady when she got mad.

When I write I just want people to think. If it could get them thinking differently about the world that would be enough for me.