Beautiful Wisdom | Rayla Gomez
Without friends, I feel lonely. Without work to do, I feel useless. Without love, I feel sad. And without family, I could not be so optimistic about those few life subtleties when things go wrong.
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posted by Rayla | 10:34 AM
2 Comments:
I really like your wisdom. It did feel a little long at the end. The flow was kind of thrown off. Maybe change without work, I feel useless and then maybe change the very last sentence to without family, I feel hopeless. I don't know, maybe sum it up with one word. Very powerful though. I liked it a lot.
I agree with Suzanne. It kind of was a bit to long. Besides that, it was great. :-)
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