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Stranger Than Wal-Mart

"Some 138 million Americans shop at Wal-Mart each week, making it perhaps the single most unifying cultural force in the country."
Chris Anderson, The Long Tail

Friday, November 04, 2005

Barn| Raymond Wadsworth

He looked out the window and saw the old barn standing there in the bright moonlight. Its paint was peeling off and some of the boards were warped. He remembered how they had planned to fix it up and build a small room up in the loft for when he would come home with his family. They didn't quite know how they were going to do the plumbing for the toilet and spa, but they still had time to figure it out, or so he thought. He took a walk over to the barn passing the small pond and remembering when he caught his first fish. "It's a big one isn't it?" It seemed like such a long time ago but he remembered it as if it was yesterday.

The 1966 Corvet was sitting inside the door when he opened it. They had started to restore it and it needed a lot of work. He sat down on the old tool table they had made together. He was a carpenter and mechanic and was good at his job. The memories came flooding in from the scent of the saw dust. "This half needs to be sanded a little more and it'll be perfect," were the words that rang in his head. He began to cry and couldn't stop. He had to let go, but how? He looked up and saw a set of wrenches. He would finish restoring the car because he would have wanted him to.

1 Comments:

Blogger Christie said...

I like it! This was a pretty awesome description. Maybe it's just me but try to describe the barn a little more. I got a pretty good image in the first half. You could through a toilet in there or something! ;)Either way, I liked it because it had some definite emotion involved.

6:36 PM, November 04, 2005  

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