Lukeman Excercise Part One | Brian Wall

Surely another winter blizzard was eminent.

Surely another winter blizzard was eminent, the boy thought as he gazed at the dark clouds of the far hills, and felt the cold, piercing wind bite at his bare skin.

Lengthening my sentences and harvesting them for all they are worth is definitely something that I can improve on in my writing. Oftentimes I find myself writing very short sentences and not giving enough description.