Lukeman Excersise 3 AJ Split River

I took the opportunity to read Lukemans section on the semi-colon. It was then that I decided to apply this knowledge to my draft of "Ace" and found no use for it unless I made changes. Still, I have learned that this funtion can be used for even greater pause effect than the comma if used in the correct place. Also it is possible to use this and all punction for the creation of "tone". The more I learn, the more I have yet to know.